Play Play Play finals

Here are my three final pieces for the Play play play studio brief. 

My initial intentions for the last week of work were to develop my ideas further, and find ways in which to make the three images work as a set. 

I also needed to refine my type and image piece. I felt happy with my other two ideas, but next time i will definitely work harder in the first week to come up with ideas that I'm happy with for each and every final, because i found it hard with the time given to finish three finals whilst still developing one of them. 

On the whole i am happy with the outcome of this brief. However the fish took up quite a large amount of time, given the detail and precision that went into it, that i felt the other two didn't quite reach my expectations of quality. Time scale is definitely something i need to work on (ironically).

I feel the type and image one was a little rushed, and i definitely should have considered composition more thoroughly for that one. This was something that was said a few times in the feedback session. Another point made was that my style was slightly inconsistent, which i definitely agree with, and am aware i need to work on this in the future. Exploring type faces is another thing i should have researched more. Most of the points made in the crit were things i was already aware of and aim to improve by the next brief. Trial and error!